LOOK AT US!

LOOK AT US!
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TE TAI TOKERAU - OUR PLACE.

TERM FOUR

Our Place - Our Art
Seahorses caught my eye as I cruised through the lush seaweed. I stopped breathing for a few seconds....... 
Paul shook me as I started falling off my boogie board.
“What Paul, what?” I yelled in excitement as I caught my
breath. 
“Look at that fish!” It had hundreds of black stripes on its glistening scales.
Carrying on through the reserve, we saw lots of little dead fish. So, I thought to myself, I wonder how many fish were here and dead before they made this marine reserve? I looked   
behind me, and far away was a COLOSSAL oil refinery and a boat with UGLAND written on the side. We carried on snorkeling through the seaweed and as we drifted past, my mates from school yelled out to me as they were studying different creatures on the rocks.
The sun was shining on my back as I sweated like a pig. We came back to shore and the next group was ready and lining up for their go. Lunch passed and my big belly rumbled like ENORMOUS BOULDERS rolling down a cliff. 
Finally it was time to eat, so I opened my mouth and stuffed my whole sandwich in. Then, I stopped and thought for a second ...... I wonder how much fun camp’s going to be?
By Dylan Brown.

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